wonderful thoughts, great alliteration.Judy
Perhaps the desires should be shouted out ;)
Very Nice piece.
An exceptionally beautiful write.
Very nice haiku ~
Subterranean murmurs, love it!
well crafted ...
Wonderful, Karen ~~ :)Of course, wishing I had gone along these lines...
I love the susurration created by the alliteration.Thank you.
Nicely stated while leaving a sense of mystery.
O. adore this haiku - senuousand deep.
Wonderful, so secretive!
Such a light touch- just love it.
mysterious musings *S*
Oooo...secret desires! Dangerous!
Secrets ... just remain secret lovely haiku.
An interesting, unique take on "underground," Karen. You went for the heart and soul of the matter, and your "subterranean murmurs" is a perfect phrase. Loved it. Amyhttp://sharplittlepencil.com/2012/03/06/rich-men-suck-dverse/
There's something seductive about your words...Underground Streams
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